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[alexseanchai]

...if next writing assignment is "one paragraph", I'm doing "one sentence" just to make a point to my classmates. Not a run-on sentence, either! Like maybe just:

"Who died and made you queen?" Carol muttered, and too late realized Sandy wasn't out of earshot.

Because them some LONG paragraphs my classmates are producing.

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[sylvaine]

Hahaha, perfect!

[amaebi]

+1

[davidgillon]

Likes.

[alexseanchai]

:)

[alexseanchai]

:)

[alexseanchai]

:)

[silveradept]

Excellent.

Also: "Baby shoes for sale: never worn.", yes?

[alexseanchai]

That's a whole story, though, not just the first paragraph. Which is possibly my actual problem with classmates' assignments: trying to put the whole story and the whole backstory in the first paragraph.

[silveradept]

That would make a long paragraph. And a complete story could be the jumping point fit the story of the person that sees that ad and wants to respond to it.