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Silver Adept ([personal profile] silveradept) wrote in [personal profile] alexseanchai 2018-11-05 01:48 am (UTC)

Depending on how the story goes, it might be that a simple break of some sort, predicated by a character talking about how having so many things open and switching is terrible for attention, might do. That's if you want the reader to be pulled along in all of the stops and starts of various things as the focus changes.

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