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betaplease, nobody bit on Yuletide Discord, nobody bit anywhere else I've asked, and I am not going back to the NaNoWriMo forums until they get a permanent block feature—a four-month-tops mute that's easily circumvented does not count—and some measure of caring about accessibility)
Fandom: Miraculous Ladybug
Characters/Pairings: Adrien Agreste (& Gabriel Agreste)
Rating & Warnings: Teen, I think? and No Archive Warnings Apply, but see notes
Estimated Fic Length: fic, no clue; scene I'm worried about, 1.7K
Notes: the canon this fic is for is distinctly SFF (it's the spiritual grandkid of Sailor Moon and Wonder Woman), but that should not make any of the parts I'm worried about any different from how they'd be in a present-day-France no-speculative-elements story. (sans coronavirus.)
the scene's action is someone having a heart attack and a couple of people with CPR training and an AED working to save him; the PoV character is one of the latter, and nobody dies in this story. (probably.) I know American Heart Association changed a relevant mnemonic from ABC to CAB, and because of reasons I don't care, but if there's any other inaccuracies, I want to know.
ETA: probably good now 🙂 thanks!
betaplease, nobody bit on Yuletide Discord, nobody bit anywhere else I've asked, and I am not going back to the NaNoWriMo forums until they get a permanent block feature—a four-month-tops mute that's easily circumvented does not count—and some measure of caring about accessibility)Fandom: Miraculous Ladybug
Characters/Pairings: Adrien Agreste (& Gabriel Agreste)
Rating & Warnings: Teen, I think? and No Archive Warnings Apply, but see notes
Estimated Fic Length: fic, no clue; scene I'm worried about, 1.7K
Notes: the canon this fic is for is distinctly SFF (it's the spiritual grandkid of Sailor Moon and Wonder Woman), but that should not make any of the parts I'm worried about any different from how they'd be in a present-day-France no-speculative-elements story. (sans coronavirus.)
the scene's action is someone having a heart attack and a couple of people with CPR training and an AED working to save him; the PoV character is one of the latter, and nobody dies in this story. (probably.) I know American Heart Association changed a relevant mnemonic from ABC to CAB, and because of reasons I don't care, but if there's any other inaccuracies, I want to know.
ETA: probably good now 🙂 thanks!