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Select an exchange of dialogue from your story, and provide it at the start of the blog. Analyze that exchange, pointing out its weaknesses, and articulating why—precisely—those elements are weak. Revise the exchange to make it stronger. Finally, analyze the revised version to articulate why it is stronger; be specific and precise.

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ETA: Actually no, on reread, this might be doable: ( this is from the climax of the story, so if you'd rather read the whole story first, then tell me that so I can send it to you, rather than you clicking the cut )

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Somebody is running a leafblower and it is noisy and distracting. I need to ground and center but see previous.

Good things:
* Pleasant temperature outside such that I can have my patio doors open. (No, having them closed wouldn't reduce the noise significantly.)
* My dining nook is clean clean CLEAN.
* I did very well (by all reports) at all three performances of An Evening with Poe.

To do:
* WGSS reading questions
* read more of Dwelling on the Threshold
* overtime

Tada:
( growing list )

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Can someone define "chemicals" for me? In the sense of the word that's contrasted to "natural" and "organic", the sense referenced when saying "don't eat anything containing something you can't pronounce", the sense that's being criticized when observing that apples contain unpronounceables such as tyrosine and dihydrogen monoxide.

am fail

Forgot about the due TIME on the reading questions. AGAIN. Late assignments not accepted.

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Why do I keep looking sadly at http://www.ymcade.org/locations/dover-ymca/programs/personal-training/ THE FEE WILL NOT DECREASE TO DOABILITY.